DJ posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 10:46am for Back home - another life - Part II

AHHHH What the h**l he split in the middle of what she was saying, that's over the top even for Harry. Nice work I hope you put up part 3 soon.

James13 posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 10:41am for Back home - another life - Part II

Wow, nice chapter.

Now, Gabby's got a choice between duty, honor an what she wants. Sucks to be her :)

Kokopelli replied:

Which, of course, is part of what makes her such a complement to Harry.

Deborahsu posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 10:40am for Back home - another life - Part II

Harry just HAS to jump to conclusions with no evidence, doesn't he? Poor Gabby. Maybe Harry will take some time to actually think, realize what a prat he is, and find her this time?

Mayjest posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 9:59am for Back home - another life - Part II

This is actually turning into a good story. Not what I expected from a title involving 'drabble'. Keep it up!

Kokopelli replied:

You were expecting a train wreck perhaps?

hoser41 posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 9:53am for Back home - another life - Part II

Man, great work so far. This seems more like real life than alot of the other stuff that I have read.

Kokopelli replied:

Yeah, I'm just overrun by Veela women who adore me . . . (not!)

Fasor posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 8:20am for Back home - another life - Part II

a very nice story :)

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 8:03am for Back home - another life - Part II

Excellent chapter. I'd be curious to know more about how Hermione came out of her coma.

The idea of Harry using (properly prescribed) muggle depression medication is very interesting. Considering his life, it's not hard to believe that he has permanent neurochemical imbalances.

Regarding the split, I know you need to set up the plot point, but I can't help but think that Gabrielle would know him a little better by then.

Thanks for sharing with us.

Kokopelli replied:

a) an Empathic healer on loan from France;

b) write what you know;

c) Gabrielle has her own issues, but please remember that by this time she's known Harry for four months, and she's having objectivity problems because of her infatuation.

You're welcome.