Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 29th August 2006 6:50pm for Lost Lambs - Part I

I like this story. Thanks so much for writing it. Romance can never run smooth for Harry so this is a good example. I like the AU idea of Gabrielle. It is sad Ginny had to die for this to happen but it leaves other possiblilities open. I look forward to the next chapter! pms

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Tuesday 29th August 2006 5:02pm for Lost Lambs - Part I

Excellent chapter, once again, John. I like the characterization of Gabriel in this story. There is pretty much nothing in canon to go on, so it leaves so much up to the author, which is often a recipe for disaster in Fanfiction, but you did good.

That head auror on this hunt, Fuso, is just the sort that does fill the ranks of professionals; the person more interested in their own fiefdom rather than what would be best and fastest when time is a concern. It is a shame.

I didn't understand why Harry didn't stay with his fiance, until the last when you mentioned that he had much to do before he could rest, and so he souldn't want to disturb her on coming back.

Thank you for writing.

Mike (MoA)

KateHC posted a comment on Tuesday 29th August 2006 4:02pm for Lost Lambs - Part I

Much is yet to happen to our happy couple.

DJ posted a comment on Tuesday 29th August 2006 3:20pm for Lost Lambs - Part I

Nice work I am having a lot of fun reading this story of yours.

Crys posted a comment on Tuesday 29th August 2006 2:37pm for Lost Lambs - Part I

> operating a small printing business, wedding announcements and the like
I think I can guess a coming "unofficial thank you" gift. Or will it be a wedding gift?

Nice variation on veela Mated sub-genre. Some of the same rules, but not all of 'em.

> big erotic lump of magic
Now THAT is a unique description! :)