Stories from Sixth (and Seventh) Year
Storm Clouds (Summer after Sixth Year)
By kokopelli
Reviews
Claire_D posted a comment on Thursday 8th February 2007 7:58am for Storm Clouds (Summer after Sixth Year)
Oh that was great. A wonderful summary of the summer, a great way to merge canon and fanon.
CootiePatootie posted a comment on Thursday 8th February 2007 2:47am for Storm Clouds (Summer after Sixth Year)
I like the way this took the existing TLOS universe and integrated some of the elements from HBP. I especially liked the permanent sticking charm for the ferret. Perfect.
Ginny's comment that lifetime celibacy vows are "not catching" was pretty funny, too.
On a side note, I've been doing a lot of proofreading work in my "real" life, and I must say, it is SUCH a treat to read your stuff: words are spelled correctly and used in the proper context. Heaven! ;-)
Really, such a good update. I love this universe; I hate to see it come to an end, as I have enjoyed every bit of it to date. I look forward to seeing what you finish it up with.
Cheers,
Cassie
The Resident posted a comment on Wednesday 7th February 2007 9:38pm for Storm Clouds (Summer after Sixth Year)
It's been a while, but it was worth the wait. A very cute way to cover all the summer activities to get us ready for another school year. Keep up the great work and I hope that the next update will be soon.
seeker77 posted a comment on Wednesday 7th February 2007 11:40am for Storm Clouds (Summer after Sixth Year)
As i said on your LJ thank you for finishing this. I look forward to reading your writing (the bunny was very good) and re-reading again.
mjc posted a comment on Wednesday 7th February 2007 11:04am for Storm Clouds (Summer after Sixth Year)
Darn...too short, but covered the important points, I guess.
clayton day posted a comment on Wednesday 7th February 2007 10:04am for Storm Clouds (Summer after Sixth Year)
This series is fantastic. I love the way you've integrated religion, magic, and of course the snow dragons. I must admit TLOS and this are two of the very few stories I feel comfortable recommending to anyone who is interested in reading HP fan fiction regardless of age or religious feelings.
Again thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Wednesday 7th February 2007 5:32am for Storm Clouds (Summer after Sixth Year)
Wow. Jumping from New Year's Day to end of August in 2500 words is rather a lot. Especially considering the large events that happened in between.
I hope that this is set up for where you want to be when you continue, rather than rushing through to just be done.
Either way, I did enjoy reading it. Thanks for sharing it with us.
KateHC posted a comment on Wednesday 7th February 2007 4:49am for Storm Clouds (Summer after Sixth Year)
Splendid, as always. I like the use of writing in a diary, it is expository and intimate at the same time.
You are a master at including memorable details. I could picture Gabrielle and the goblin dancing with abandon. And the semi-disguised tattoo, brilliant.
I know that all good things must come to an end but I will miss this series.
Kokopelli replied:
While you might miss this series, I will appreciate getting it out of my head!
As to the tattoo - a snow dragon hides so as to be invisible (imagine a white dragon against a background of white snow), so Tk'lch thought it was a hoot to make the marking scar "pale and spotted."
Wolfric posted a comment on Wednesday 7th February 2007 4:38am for Storm Clouds (Summer after Sixth Year)
I enjoyed this chapter very much but then I have enjoyed all of your efforts. Please keep up the good work. Thanks. W.
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 14th March 2007 3:25pm for Storm Clouds (Summer after Sixth Year)