By kokopelli
Reviews
cmatbmed posted a comment on Tuesday 16th May 2006 7:03am
Thanks for the Chapter.
Jasmine and Abelard have always been two of my favorite characters. I think it is that distrust of Dumbledore thing.
thanks again for sharing
cmatbmed
Wooster posted a comment on Monday 15th May 2006 11:14pm
It was interesting to have a chappie that involved neither Harry or Ginny. As I'm rather fond of all your original characters, especially Jasmine, I rather enjoyed it! Good job! Esp. on the updating quickly!
Crys posted a comment on Monday 15th May 2006 10:50pm
Pleasant interaction between two interesting characters. A little back-story filling.
Thanks for sharing.
juliet posted a comment on Monday 15th May 2006 10:11pm
Firstly this is a fantastic universe, and it was wonderful to see another update in such a short time. I enjoyed reading the introduction of the horcrux hunt into this universe and the other thing that struck me was the conversation between Jasmine and Abelard about Voldemort - probably as it showed little emotion as they are not personally involved.
Look forward to reading more.
amulder posted a comment on Monday 15th May 2006 9:45pm
Good Job, John.
I still like the mirroring, where first Abelard talks of his own history w/Romance, and then we unexpectedly turn to Jasmine's.
best,
...art
Patches posted a comment on Monday 15th May 2006 9:02pm
This is an interesting chapter. I was under the impression that Jasmine was committed to helping Abelard. Now it seems that she is free to become betrothed to a man that she can accept or reject as she sees fit. Changes some things. I wonder how it will affect Harry and Ginny to have Jasmine leave Abelard if that were to happen. Thank you for an interesting chapter. pms
CootiePatootie posted a comment on Monday 15th May 2006 7:57pm
I can hardly believe that I get two updates in such a short time frame. I understand you were in that peculiar hell known as "meetings" or was it a "conference"? ;-)
Seriously, I really like Jasmine, goon on her to get a beau. And don't get me started on Abelard, he's the grandfather I wish I had.
Thanks for another great update. I can't wait to see Lupin & Tonks tie the knot.
Cheers!
CP
Janeth posted a comment on Monday 15th May 2006 5:42pm
I really love this story and am very happy that you are updating more often now. Thanks
MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Monday 15th May 2006 5:29pm
Nice chapter, to keep us in suspence from last chapters cliffy. Update soon.
MPF
saugart posted a comment on Monday 15th May 2006 5:08pm
Thanks for another good chapter.
millercommamatt posted a comment on Monday 15th May 2006 2:23pm
If she's really a War Witch, you won't have to act quickly, you'll just have to survive when she comes to collect you. ;)
-millercommamatt
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Monday 15th May 2006 2:13pm
Nice bit of Jasmine & Abelard. Thanks!
Gardengirl posted a comment on Monday 15th May 2006 1:52pm
Thanks, John! I needed a pick-me-up. Glad to hear what Jasmine's up to!
harryp123 posted a comment on Monday 15th May 2006 12:59pm
Good chapter. leaving a cliff at the end for use to have our own thoughts.
Graup posted a comment on Sunday 14th May 2006 2:34pm
Enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for sharing it.
Manatheron posted a comment on Sunday 14th May 2006 2:33pm
Awww how CUTE!
K nuff of that. Not alot of action (See None) not that this is a problem. Obviously this is storyline continuation, and it doesn't all need to be hack and slash, expecally around christmas. Loved the so called prank however, and thinking of ginny in that dress {Lecherous Grin}
On the whole, excellent story.
cmatbmed posted a comment on Sunday 14th May 2006 9:38am
Great story Glad you are back.
Crys posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 11:54am
"I won’t bother to describe the dress because you wouldn’t appreciate the sewing details . . ."
And as a fellow male, I thank you for NOT exposing us to such a description :)
Thanks for the fun little chappie.
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 6:08am
Very nice to see new chapters coming. I greatly enjoyed reading it, thanks!
I do wonder, however, about some of the continuity. According to the last chapter of TLoS, Harry only had to go back to the Dursleys for a weekend.
And after making it a plot point about the bond bothering them if they're apart for more than a day or two, I don't understand why they weren't getting together every other day or something.
The Resident posted a comment on Friday 19th May 2006 12:53pm