Frank Hacklander posted a comment on Thursday 19th March 2020 6:15pm for This Changes Everything - Installment Two

I've said it more than once and I will say it again, what makes this fascinating is not just the interplay between Susan and Harry but the characer of Paxton. I guess I am a Paxton fanboy, more's the pity. I suspect that he is effectively your self-insert, but, if so, very skillfully done.

BTW, my recommendation for a book of the moment is Love in the Time of Cholera by one of my favorite latin american fabulists....

mwinter posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd January 2020 10:51pm for This Changes Everything - Installment Two

Cool update. Sorry haven't reviewed until now. Since this site isn't that used that much by authors any more I only check it out every 3 or 4 months. Sorry. Great update. Awaiting more.

RubinCompServ posted a comment on Wednesday 8th January 2020 9:24am for This Changes Everything - Installment Two

I know you're not really writing anymore, which is a loss for fanfic readers worldwide, as I think this is the beginning for a potentially fantastic story. Any time you want to add to it, I'll be here to read it!

Kokopelli replied:

Thanks for your kind words.   I've not stopped completely.   The first time I stopped writing it was because my children were all teens and needed more of my time than the fanfic world needed.   The children are grown and past college age, so that's no longer an issue.   I'm now spending a good amount of time caring for my aging mother-in-law who moved into an assisted living facility with dementia.   I still poke at this story - the next chapter is an installment with Susan and Hermione.  

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Tuesday 24th December 2019 10:33am for This Changes Everything - Installment Two

Yep, it's official. Someone gave "May you have an interesting life" to Harry as a birth blessing, the rotten (or stupid) sods. Harry's "saving people thing" is alive and well, no surprise. It's nice to see Ginny as more than just a hopeless fangirl, kudos on that.

I also am glad that Tim Joy continues to operate this site (thank you Mr. Joy), for fair use doctrine on copyrighted works, and fanfic authors like yourself who have used their hard-won free time to write stories that help make life more interesting.

Kokopelli replied:

I still hear from Tim from time to time, but he's stopped writing. I hope that's temporary. Thanks for the review.

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Wanderer posted a comment on Saturday 16th November 2019 11:30am for This Changes Everything - Installment Two

Quite entertaining and very good in the 'AU split naturally grows as the tree grows' kind of way :)

Thanks!

Kokopelli replied:

The whole point of fan fiction is to deal with the "what if" rather than grinding away and retelling JKRs story.   I suppose it might be challenging to do the entire canon from another character's perspective, maybe Luna, Susan or Draco, but I'm not at all interested in that task.   Thanks for the review.

Hoss posted a comment on Saturday 26th October 2019 10:03pm for This Changes Everything - Installment Two

Thanks I needed that right now your always good fun to read.

Wolfric posted a comment on Sunday 20th October 2019 12:19am for This Changes Everything - Installment Two

Great to hear from you again. I enjoyed the chapter. I am also thankful that Tim still operates the site. Thanks for writing. W.

Jimbocous posted a comment on Friday 18th October 2019 7:44pm for This Changes Everything - Installment Two

Thanks. Good stuff, looking forward to the next installment!

Kairan1979 posted a comment on Wednesday 16th October 2019 2:00pm for This Changes Everything - Installment Two

Pleased to see this story updated.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Wednesday 16th October 2019 1:33pm for This Changes Everything - Installment Two

A well written and insightful take on the summer and the Dementors.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Tuesday 15th October 2019 7:14pm for This Changes Everything - Installment Two

I remember reading this somewhere and a few more chapters but thanks for sharing!

HopelessFan posted a comment on Tuesday 15th October 2019 1:44pm for This Changes Everything - Installment Two

It's always good to see a new post from you, I'm a huge fan

amulder posted a comment on Monday 14th October 2019 9:38pm for This Changes Everything - Installment Two

So is Paxton a bit like Jasmine from the letters of summer? As in, a competent helpful adult, who is also kind of mysterious and all that?

Totally was not expecting the Dolores surprise death!

Thanks for sharing

Kokopelli replied:

Paxton would say he's not all that mysterious.  

Jasmine was an uber-competent witch in the ninja bodyguard tradition.  

One of the many plot holes in JKR's narrative is how the Dementors got from Azkaban to Little Whinging.   I'm assuming that they didn't ride the ferry to the mainland and then catch a train.   Here I'm painting Dolores as someone who might have been played by Lucius Malfoy.